Alex Williams Edit 1

Dope! Not sure of how to give constructive criticism for your play style, that's more of a you thing to figure out.
In terms of constructive criticism for the edit, I would say to just try and make sure your shots are lined up properly. You had a couple where the cam was crooked, so unless it was a stylistic choice made for specific reasons, I would say to make sure it's straight. Also, maybe try getting some b roll to use as transition clips. There's nothing wrong with just putting together a bunch of tricks back to back, but a video becomes more interesting if you include something other than the tricks. I would've liked to see more of the snow you were playing in because I don't ever get to see the snow.
Dope edit though! Just some thoughts I had so you can improve on the next one